I like the fact that youre trying to make a series, but the art is just not easy to look at. It looks very amateurish
"Trying" to make a series? =P Dude, I AM making a series. =3 But thanks for your feedback, I'm always trying to improve my drawing skills and getting better all the time...I mean if you've seen some of my art from last year or...even two years ago *shudders* you'd know I've improved a lot since then. XD
might i suggest r/montageparodies for things like this
fok u make a roblox parody
eh shoulda made somethin. good job though
this want the average in your face fuck off stuff that gets peoples attention. This was actuallu well written. gud jub
Maybe if there was some actual plot i could rate higher, but this just looked like an intro.
well all you did was make one animation that lasted like 2 seconds, convert it to a symbol, tween it, and duplicate it.
This felt like there was actually effort put into it.
I absolutely fucking LOVED this. Keep this up
Nice job Bryn! smooth animation. looks good
Thanks Gavin! :D
newgrounds.com — Your #1 online entertainment & artist community! All your base are belong to us.